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科技若何影响咱们的糊口

Whether one is willing or not, he can not deny that endless innovations of technology are constantly changing our lives. Appatently, not everyone is optimistic about the trend, but there are unquestionable positive aspects of it.

  To the senior in the society, health and security are the most concerned issues. Today, thanks to the growing process in medicine field, the life span and quality have been greatly enhanced. Old people are becoming increasingly energetic and rigorous. Besides, technology also ensures the security of those old people who live separately from their offspring gimmicks such as auto-alarming bell free them from the worries about possible gas release or theft.

  To the young, the startling advances in application technology enable them to work and live more comfortably. Automation the computer-controlled system, along with assembly lines and robots not only cuts down the prices by mass production,but also frees people from dangerous and tiring working conditions. After work, benefiting from all the conveniences provided by such handy appliances as microwave ovens, washing machines, or automobiles, people enjoy a lot more leisure time and feel more relaxed.

  As to children, they benefit most from the boom of information technology. For decades, computers and communication systems processed information only for selected audiences. Now,the development of technology makes everyone, including children, to get cheap information. Exposed to this from the early age, today's children learn by trial and error how to collect and process information into useful knowledge at a fast pace. What's more, through Internet and telecommunication, the children are closely connected with the outside world and are likely to be more competitive and creative than their older generations.

  It might be because new technology is booming out at such a fantastic speed that many people aren't feeling at ease with it.However, it does aim at making our lives more convenient and comfortable. My opinion is that wait indulgently for technology to perfect itself, try it voluntarily, and the world is certain to be much better than ever.

  简 评

  本文应用分类法说明科技进步糊口品质这一主题。作者相称奇妙地根据春秋分类,先容令各个春秋层次受害最深的各项科技功效,层次了了,信息丰硕,抒发流利,可算是同主题作文中相称好的一篇。

  文章篇幅不长,却归纳综合了差别科技对差别春秋阶级的庞大影响和人们行动体例和精力面孔的变更,堪称一针见血。这是因为本文作者说话气概松散,并较好地把握了内容要具体,用词要明白的写作准绳:如"technology also ensures thesecurity Of those old people who live separately from their offspring-gimmicks such as auto-alarmlng bell free them from the worries about possible gas-release or theft."一句既是概述:科技保证老年人宁静;又是论据:古代举措措施处理后顾之忧。而auto-alarming bell和possible gas-release or theft等词供给了具体例证。同时,作者说话隧道,"most concerned issues,life span,selected audiences,exposed to"等抒发非常精确纯熟。若是不在进修中的透辟把握和日常平凡的大批浏览,是很难做到辞汇如斯应用自若的。



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